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Update Lucy In the Sky With Darrell: Actualism Part 3

Lucy In the Sky With Darrell
Part 3


A History of Actualism
In Iowa City


Anthology of Collaborations






[Drawing #16]



Chapter 1
Introduction


When Iowa City Actualism was blooming in the 1970s, we wrote a lot of collaboration poems, and I made it a practice to save the ones I was involved in. I put the collab folders in a storage box, and then I forgot about them for three decades. Just two days ago, I found the folders, which contained over 220 pages of work. Some of them were unsigned, but at least 194 pages had the names or initials of two or more people--48 people in all. Here is a Child’s Garden of Actualism.

Notes on reading:

Each poem is preceded by a tilde. This enables the reader to jump from poem to poem by doing a search for tildes. It also helps to know for certain that a specific line is the title.

Each writer’s identifying letters (usually initials) are preceded by an accent mark. This enables the reader to skip to the collaborations in which a specific writer participates by searching for the accent mark followed by the two identification letters--thus, searching for 'DG would take you to poems in which Darrell Gray participated.

In some of the collaborations each section is attributed to the person who wrote it. In most of the collaborations, however, authorship is attributed at the end to all the authors together.

The first poem, “Party Poem,” has the most known collaborators--11. It is dedicated to the Writers Workshop.

The last poem, “Marathon Collaboration Poem,” is the longest--31 pages. It was written by many people during the Second Poetry Marathon, but signed by none.



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Chapter 2
List of Abbreviations

Each person has a two-letter abbreviation representing their full name.

AB        Al Buck
AC        Ann Conner
AH        Anselm Hollo
AK        Allan Kornblum
AT        Audrey Teeter
AW        Alan Willis
BA        Bruce _____
BR        Barb Raaz
BS        Barbara Sablov
CK        Cinda Kornblum
CL        Colleen Lookingbill
CM        Chuck Miller
CW        Chris Woeffels
DA        David Gitin
DF        Dale McFarland
DG        Darrell Gray
DJ        Donald Justice
DM        Dave Morice
DO        Dave Odegard
GF        Geoffrey Ford
GM        George Mattingly
GS        G.P. Skratz
HI        Hillary _____
JA        Janet _____
JB        John Birkbeck
JD        Jim Dorka
JI        Jim Bateman
JL        Judy Lawson
JM        Jim Mulac
JS        John Sjoberg
KA        Kay Amert
KF        Kathy Fetter
LC        Leander Cyrus
LD        Linda Dorff
LG        _____ _____
LW        Lynn Willard
MA        Margaret Manos
MC        Mark Cohen
MK        Michelle Kulefsky
MM        Michele Morice
MP        Many People (unsigned)
MS        Morty Sklar
NR        Neil Ruddy
PC        Pat Casteel
PI        Paul Ingram
PL        Phil Lemke
RD        Ray DiPalma
SA        Sally Redfern
SL        Steve Levine
ST        Steve Toth
SW        Scott Wright
TD        Tony D’Marinus




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Chapter 3
“Party Poem”



~ PARTY POEM


(for The Writers’ Workshop)

[Eleven people wrote this poem: 'DM 'MS 'CM 'SW 'DG 'JM 'JS 'AK 'ST 'LG 'DG. Each section has the individual author’s abbreviation listed at the end.]


1

music
inspires
the floor
shakes

                                                  'DM


2

four or five words

                                                  'MS


3

familiar plants,
        animals

                                                  'CM


4

potted
plastic

                                                  'SW


5

plantit

                                                  'DM


6

hiya, Cinth!
  wisteria?

                                                  'JM


7

one more time
the kids in the neighborhood
hey hey
that’s a great choice
one of my favorites
ships on the oceane

                                                  'MS


8

color it orange
  &
leave all that snow

                                                  'JS


9

there is a chain hook between the
cushions of this large couch.
i call it The Great Chain of Being.
we unhook the chain before opening
frozen orange juice.
good morning little schoolgirl.
i’m a couch

                                                  'AK


10

boo!

                                                  'ST


11

THE TRAVELS OF OZONE

Oh! Zone!

                                                  'SW


12

melting fish bones

        TOGETHER

                                                  'CM


13

i’m an easy bruiser

                                                  'LG


14

I wanna hold your foot,
I wanna be your leg,
I wanna look at the table.

                                                  'JM

15

a sunlit day
it’s almost may
and yet there’s snow
outside uh-oh

                                                  'DM


16

i woke up this morning
and it was this afternoon
oh i woke up this morning
mama, and it was this awful moon
so the next time ya see me coming
blah dah dah dah dah dah dah

                                                  'MS


17

scot located
them
a copy of the original, in
other words
a shadow of a former delusion
multilithed
easier than the original
not really huge, but
sewn up. Come out and visit.

                                                  'MS


18

rain
check
book

                                                  'DG


19

  I used to think the 21st Century
would be great--vast unemployment,
beautiful women, fantastic highways and buildings,
amazing drugs and record albums. Billions of geniuses
masterfully solving the subtlest impossibilities. That’s
what it felt like, being 27 and stoned with my friends.

                                                  'JM


20

the                                           city
      words                            a
                 are               for
                       looking
                 are               for
      pages                            a
the                                          home

                                                  'DM


21

Al Buck did
Al Buck didn’t
but Al Buck

                                                  'MS


23

monkeys express
a paw

here
you are superior

                                                  'AK


24

Twenty four.

Baked bird.
Unleashed
lettaces race
through time’s
hard hat.

The vee’s
crease.

                                                  'SW


26

anti-versary

                                                  'DG


27

under the Philadelphia Cream Cheese
the hard brown table
looked like
the Phillies
How’s the ballgame
How’s the potato chip dip?

                                                  'DM


28

one two three four five
six seven eight nine ten! shouted
               the man in mission control
as he tried to make
                                the rocket
                                                 return to the launchpad.

                                                  'DM


29

“as bats fly
 caves grow”

           --Spelunker’s Guidebook

                                                  'DM


30

what time is it?

gold.


                                                  'AK


31

What is “it?”

Things, generally.


                                                  'SW


32

“OUT TO SPACE”

out to lunch
out of breath
out of line
out there
out with you!
ow t
burnt out
out house
make out
outlanders
outlandish
out of your head
out of gas
in   side out

                                                  'MS


33

The Well-Fed Bi-ped

bi-ped
bi-pass
biluminous
bitaxatious
binary
blahbi

                                                  'MS


34

after the cat walked in
the human collage
walked out

                                                  'DM


35

comma, period.


                                                  'SW


[signed:]

Scott Wright Sirs. bros. sisters.
Glandfather Kornblum
Stepson Gray
Mormon Sklar
Dave Morose



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Chapter 4
An Anthology of Collaborations

~ WORKSHOP COURSE LIST FOR NEXT YEAR

8:282                Rhyme Workshop
8:283                Rhythm Workshop
8:285                Onomatopoeia: When to use it   (Seminar)
8:286                Beginning Linebreaks
8:286b              Advanced Linebreaks
8:287                Iambs, Anapests, and Dactyls: Comparative Study
8:289                Caesuras: Now and Then (Historical Study)
8:290                The Literary Origins of Variable Feet Traced to Their Roots
8:291                Poetic Anatomy
8:292                The Economic Implications of Free Verse
8:293                The Psychology of the Caesura and the Collective
                            Unconscious
8:294                Stability Theory in Fluid Rhyme Schemes
8:295                Applied Imagery
8:296                Literary Genes and Chromosomes
8:297                Introduction to Doggerel
8:298                Intermediate Doggerel
8:300                Natural Hazards of Poetry & Doggerel
8:301b              Field Trips with Pencils
8:301c              How to Correct Incorrections
8:301d              How to Write Right
8:301e              The Poet in Action
8:301g              Poetaster Laboratory
8:301h              The Alphabet and Its Purpose in Reality
8:312                 Successful and Unsucessful Metaphors
8:313                 The Disappearing End Rhyme


'DG 'JS 'DM
 near Xmas ‘71


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~THE PRESIDENT HIMSELF

“& I welcome this kind of examination, because people have got to know whether or not their president is a crook.  Well...”

The president is not a cook.

The president is not a candle-maker.

The president is not a registered nurse.

The president is not a rock & roll star.

The president is not a Neanderthal man.

The president is not a Clerk Typist II.

The president is not a housewife.

The president is not a management trainee.

The president is not a ballet dancer.

The president is not a pseudo-intellectual.

The president is not a short-order cook.

The president is not a heavy-equipment operator.

The president is not a fork-lift operator.

The president is not a telephone operator.

The president is not a small-time operator.

The president is not a cellist.

The president is not a registered Communist.

The president is not a conscious philanderer.

The president is not a dermatologist.

The president is not a ketchup manufacturer.

The president is not a new-car salesman.

The president is not a tinhorn gambler.

The president is not a factor.

The president is not a mother.

The president is not a witch.

The president is not a podiatriast.

The president is not a quarterback.

The president is not a hearing-aid specialist.

The president is not a typewriter.

The president is not a chirpractor.

The president is not a special prosecutor.

The president is not a Riverboat Captain.

The president is not a tattle-tale.

The president is not a peanut vendor.

The president is not a jukebox repairman.

The president is not a flying carpet sweeper or a Guided Bissell.

The president is not a swinger of birches.

The president is not a glass of milk like a cigarette.

The president is not a grapevine.

The president is not a Hoover vacuum cleaner salesman.

The president is not a music box.

The president is not a monstrous vice-president.

The president is not a Republican pope.

The president is not a better mousetrap.

The president is not a stitch in time.

The president is not a trucker.

The president is not a trick-or-treater.

The president is not a rag-time Cowboy Joe.

The president is not a yoyo champion.

The president is not a Jewish mother.

The president is not a nagging housewife.

The president is not a cross-section of an orange.

The president is not a colostomy bag.

The president is not a poet.

The president is not a second thought.

The president is not a Chinese restaurant.

The president is not a Polish sausage.

The president is not a warm puppy.

The president is not a mighty fortress.

The president is not a piece of ass.

The president is not a hormone imbalance.

The president is not a creative plaything.

The president is not a sugar-daddy.

The president is not a Milky Way bar.

The president is not a well-worn homily.

The president is not a dirty diaper.

The president is not a good gopher.

The president is not a living bra.

The president is not a great lake.

The president is not a grape stomper.

The president is not a hamburger with everything.

The president is not a test pattern.

The president is not a seventeen-year locust.

The president is not a bird in paradise.

The president is not a tea for two.

The president is not a stepping stone.

The president is not a fish stick.

The president is not a Pullman porter.

The president is not a president.

The president is not

The president

                                                  'AB 'DG 'PI 'AK 'CK 'PL 'DM 'GS 'ST


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~ THE TOTALLY NON-RIP-OFFABLE POEM


I am the totally un-rip-offable poem
Try me, smart mother fucker
Stick your dick up my ass
Nothing
Cold stone

Try and fuck me
Try and get me to suck your dick
To eat your pussy
Never in a thousand years

If anything
I’ll rip you off
Don’t look for emotions here
There are none you can claim false

Step on my ass
You’ll