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Lucy In the Sky With Darrell: Actualism Part 4

Lucy In the Sky With Darrell
Part 4


The Story of Actualism

In Iowa City

Introduction

 

 

When Iowa City Actualism was blooming in the 1970s, we wrote a lot of collaboration poems, and I made it a practice to save the ones I was involved in. I put the collab folders in a storage box, and then I forgot about them for three decades. Just two days ago, I found the folders, which contained over 220 pages of work. Some of them were unsigned, but at least 194 pages bore the names or initials of two or more people--48 people in all. Here is a child’s garden of Actualism.

 

 

Notes on reading:

 

Each poem is preceded by a tilde. This enables the reader to jump from poem to poem by doing a search for tildes. It also helps to know for certain that a specific line is the title.

 

 

 

 

 

Each writer’s identifying letters (usually initials) are preceded by an accent mark. This enables the reader to skip to the collaborations in which a specific writer participates by searching for the accent mark followed by the two identification letters--thus, searching for 'DG would take you to poems in which Darrell Gray participated.

 

In some of the collaborations each section is attributed to the person who wrote it. In most of the collaborations, however, authorship is attributed at the end to all the authors together.

 

The first poem, “Party Poem,” has the most known collaborators--11. It is dedicated to the Writers Workshop.

 

The last poem, “Marathon Collaboration Poem,” is the longest--31 pages. It was written by many during the 2nd Poetry Marathon, but signed by none.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Index of Abbreviations

 

 

Each person has a two-letter abbreviation representing their full name.

 

 

AB              Al Buck

AC              Ann Conner

AH              Anselm Hollo

AK              Allan Kornblum

AT              Audrey Teeter

AW             Alan Willis

BA              Bruce _____

BR              Barb Raaz

BS              Barbara Sablov

CK              Cinda Kornblum

CM             Chuck Miller

CW             Chris Woeffels

DA              David Gitin

DF              Dale McFarland

DG              Darrell Gray

DJ               Donald Justice

DM             Dave Morice

DO              Dave Odegard

GF              Geoffrey Ford

GM             George Mattingly

GS              G.P. Skratz

HI               Hillary _____

JA               Janet _____

JB               John Birkbeck

JD               Jim Dorka

JI                Jim Bateman

JL               Judy Lawson

JM              Jim Mulac

JS               John Sjoberg

KA              Kay Amert

KF              Kathy Fetter

LC              Leander Cyrus

LD              Linda Dorff

LG              _____ _____

LW             Lynn Willard

MA             Margaret Manos

MC             Mark Cohen

MK             Michelle Kulefsky

MM            Michele Morice

MP              Many People (unsigned)

MS              Morty Sklar

NR              Neil Ruddy

PC              Pat Casteel

PI                Paul Ingram

PL               Phil Lemke

RD              Ray DiPalma

SA              Sally Redfern

SL               Steve Levine

ST               Steve Toth

SW             Scott Wright

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~ PARTY POEM

 

                                                (for The Writers’ Workshop)

 

[Ten people wrote this poem: 'DM 'MS 'CM 'SW 'JM 'JS 'AK 'ST 'LG 'DG. Each section has the individual author’s abbreviation listed at the end.]

 

 

1

 

music

inspires

the floor

shakes

 

                                                'DM

 

 

2

 

four or five words

 

                                                'MS

 

 

3

 

familiar plants,

        animals

 

                                                'CM

 

 

4

 

potted

plastic

 

                                                'SW

 

 

5

 

plantit

 

                                                'DM

 

 

6

 

hiya, Cinth!

  wisteria?

 

                                                'JM

 

 

7

 

one more time

the kids in the neighborhood

hey hey

that’s a great choice

one of my favorites

ships on the oceane

 

                                                'MS

 

 

8

 

color it orange

  &

leave all that snow

 

                                                'JS

 

 

9

 

there is a chain hook between the

cushions of this largte couch.

i call it The Great Chain of Being.

we unhook the chain before opening

frozen orange juice.

good morning little schoolgirl.

i’m a couch

 

                                                'AK

 

 

10

 

boo!

 

                                                'ST

 

 

11

 

THE TRAVELS OF OZONE

 

Oh! Zone!

 

                                                'SW

 

 

12

 

melting fish bones

 

        TOGETHER

 

                                                'CM

 

 

13

 

i’m an easy bruiser

 

                                                'LG

 

 

14

 

I wanna hold your foot,

I wanna be your leg,

I wanna look at the table.

 

                                                'JM

 

15

 

a sunlit day

it’s almost may

and yet there’s snow

outside uh-oh

 

                                                'DM

 

 

16

 

i woke up this morning

and it was this afternoon

oh i woke up this mornin